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Not to be crass or anything.But.As your teacher/person who reads your poetry - I very much like the change of title. It's truer for one thing.
Haha how is that crass?
Honestly. Oh and i dont no if i'll keep this title. I'm still not sure whether i like it.
This is my attempt at a Haiku.
But how is it crass? Honestly!!
theres a title? i am not thinking i have eyes or something other than that luv the title? haha no i like how ya have constructed this one very coolfor a first attempt well done!!! cant wait to read your other onesand mams how was your comment crass?
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Not to be crass or anything.
But.
As your teacher/person who reads your poetry - I very much like the change of title.
It's truer for one thing.
Haha how is that crass?
Honestly. Oh and i dont no if i'll keep this title. I'm still not sure whether i like it.
This is my attempt at a Haiku.
But how is it crass? Honestly!!
theres a title?
i am not thinking i have eyes or something
other than that luv the title? haha no i like how ya have constructed this one very cool
for a first attempt well done!!! cant wait to read your other ones
and mams how was your comment crass?
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