Monday, June 9, 2008

Cry on my shoulder.
It will be ok, I'm here.
I wont let you fall.

6 comments:

Brass Baboon said...

Not to be crass or anything.

But.

As your teacher/person who reads your poetry - I very much like the change of title.

It's truer for one thing.

Scratch said...

Haha how is that crass?

Scratch said...

Honestly. Oh and i dont no if i'll keep this title. I'm still not sure whether i like it.

Scratch said...

This is my attempt at a Haiku.

Scratch said...

But how is it crass? Honestly!!

post-it said...

theres a title?

i am not thinking i have eyes or something

other than that luv the title? haha no i like how ya have constructed this one very cool

for a first attempt well done!!! cant wait to read your other ones

and mams how was your comment crass?