Murmers From the Floor Boards: Rain

Thursday, May 22, 2008

Rain

When the rain falls
Who will be inside
And who will stand out
To taste it?

4 comments:

Brass Baboon said...: hehe

so true. so true.

many times i run out to taste the rain. and feel it wash the insideness away from me.; May 23, 2008 at 12:02 AM
Brass Baboon said...: and note - no '1 line kicker at the end' which you complain dictates your style.

i like.; May 23, 2008 at 12:03 AM
Scratch said...: Thanks for all bronze b.; May 23, 2008 at 12:03 AM
Scratch said...: Truth...; May 23, 2008 at 12:04 AM

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