"No I can't."
"Give it a go."
"I cant explain."
"Just try."
"I cant, it's too hard.
Tell you what.
Step inside my head,
Take a look around
And tell me what you find.
Turn left, and make two rights.
Push through the black veil
It wont be easy, but
You can do it.
"Head past the guilt
And shame
And onward to the end.
Not far now.
"Break through the secrets
And the evil intent
Break through the lies
And hidden pain.
"And there will you find it,
That 'amazing prize' that
You want so badly.
Bitter disappointment,
The finding is no joy
Or glory."
Sorry. I still cant explain.
7 years ago
7 comments:
And yet you are trying... i appreciate that.
Hehe. I love the informal conversation poem. It's a cool variation from other stuff I've seen of yours.
I'd like to take that journey. Only I think the destination will be much different.
haha! No i dont think it would be that fun in my head.
If you try, and dont suceed, what have you accomplished? Jack shit. So what is the point?
i really like it... you should make a map of the inside of ya head.. it would be AWESUM.. can i try?
Er, can u try? I'm not sure what u mean. Do u want to make a map of your head, or do u want to attempt the journey inside my head?
yr head silly!!!!! i dont have directions through my head it is to full foa that!!! and i wouldnt like to make one either... tehe
Ok that is awsome i really like it. it has got to be one of yuor best bt haven read many so i dont no.
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